i really like your content page because you have used a good amount of text and images together. the page is eye catching and its clear that it is part of the same magaizne. some of the images could be cut out a bit more neater but other then that its very good. Jessie
Your contents page has been done really well. There is a good balance between images and text. Its very clear. You can tell that it is a part of the same magazine, the house style has been stuck to well.
I like the simplicity of the contents page, but i think the images used could be done a bit more creatively and more stylised. They looks slightly more like everyday photos rather than a shoot. Other than that i like the simple text and the letter from the editor bit. I would had layed it out in more of a sophisticated way but it depends who your target audience is.
i really like your content page because you have used a good amount of text and images together. the page is eye catching and its clear that it is part of the same magaizne. some of the images could be cut out a bit more neater but other then that its very good. Jessie
ReplyDeleteYour contents page has been done really well. There is a good balance between images and text. Its very clear. You can tell that it is a part of the same magazine, the house style has been stuck to well.
ReplyDeleteI like the simplicity of the contents page, but i think the images used could be done a bit more creatively and more stylised. They looks slightly more like everyday photos rather than a shoot. Other than that i like the simple text and the letter from the editor bit. I would had layed it out in more of a sophisticated way but it depends who your target audience is.
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